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Tips for Writing a Fiction Book (Part Three)

Monday, February 9th, 2009

The first tip for writing a fiction book highlighted how outlining your novel can help develop ideas, while the second tip focused on added character development. This last tip will emphasize how to flesh out your novel with subplots.

Building Depth

Creating supplementary stories to your main storyline really helps to engage readers by giving your novel depth (as opposed to a boring, linear story). Also, it allows you to put your characters into situations that vary from the central plot which can enhance certain attributes or demonstrate a different side of your characters.

Unless you’re creating a children’s book, readers want complexity and substance that will make them question characters’ motives and actions. By having a subplot or two, it supplies an opportunity for your characters to expand out of their conventional element into situations where they can display more personality or abilities that wouldn’t be possible within the structure of the main plot.

Make it Connect

Of course, one of the major concerns is not to letting your subplots dominate your novel or water down the central plot. Subplots are meant to supplement, not supplant. Likewise, subplots need to be well-developed or they might take away the reader’s attention as they ask, “Why was that in there? What was the point of that?”

So, the trick is making the subplot secondary (which is what it’s supposed to be) to the main storyline, but at the same time making it relevant enough to have in the first place.

Conclusion

I hope that the three-part series of tips for writing a fiction book were helpful. As always, I’m interested in hearing what you think. Do you have additional tips for novelists? Feel free to write a comment below.

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Pros and Cons of Hiring a Ghostwriter

Monday, February 2nd, 2009

If you are looking to hire a ghostwriter, your selection could seem endless. Do you want to hire by price or by quality? Is there a way to get both? Do you want the ghostwriter to have English as their first language? Does the ghostwriter’s voice matter? Are they proficient (or at least familiar) with the topic I need written?

After you take a quick inventory of what you need completed by a ghostwriter, make a pros and cons list that will aid in your search. Doing so will allow you to get an idea of how much a ghostwriter can help with your writing project…or it can reveal that you might not benefit from having someone ghostwrite for you. The following is a small list to get you started.

Pros

  • Save Time: If writing isn’t your niche, think of what you could be doing with your time (i.e., promoting your project, finding a publisher, etc.).
  • A New Voice: It has happened to all of us at one point or another; we know what to say, but don’t know how to make it sound quite right. The appropriate ghostwriter can help you sound more professional, laid back, humorous…anything that you need your project to be.
  • Support: Having someone who is proficient in writing is a great luxury when you need new ideas for your project. A good ghostwriter will be constructive and encouraging with your written project, allowing for a completed work that is acceptable to you.

Cons

  • If English Isn’t the First Language: Although there are some rare exceptions, when a writer’s native tongue isn’t English, you can sense it in their writing. Make sure you know who you’re hiring and what quality (if any) you’ll be sacrificing.
  • Royalties/Contracts: Some ghostwriters prefer (or require) some type of royalties for subsequent sales of the book or writing project. This may be okay if you don’t want to pay a lot upfront, but it could be more than you’re willing to pay in the long run should your manuscript sell many copies. Be sure you know the boundaries of your ghostwriting contract.
  • Pricing is Too Low or High: C’mon, are you really expecting brand new, articulate work that is written by an experienced professional for about $3 a page? How about a 300-page self-help book written in three months for $10,000? Personally, I would steer clear of the “dollar menu pricing” ghostwriters (lack of quality) and the “my pen writes with liquid gold…really, that’s why I charge this much” ghostwriters (lack of…reality?).

(Note: There are ghostwriters that have attained “pen writes with liquid gold” status, but it is far from the norm, in my opinion.)

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Tips for Writing a Fiction Book (Part Two)

Monday, January 12th, 2009

The last Individual Project Topic was part one of “Tips for Writing a Fiction Book” in which I discussed a strategy for outlining your novel in order to make it easier to flesh out an entire story. This week I will illustrate how to develop your characters with the purpose of keeping readers intrigued with your cast (and will try not to regurgitate what’s already floating out on the Web).

Establish the Setting

I feel that when cultivating believable characters for a novel, it’s best to have your entire setting determined so that the character fits within the story’s framework. By starting character development with the setting (i.e., time period, country/land, lifestyle, etc.), you are better able to create the characters’ experiences, interests, and other attributes that will make them believable.

Interaction: Not Like You

It’s important to not put your voice (or your personality traits) into characters, as they will all come off as uninteresting…think Cruise in Valkyrie.

Your novel’s characters need to respond to situations and have conversations that coincide with their constructed nature. So, you don’t curse when you talk in everyday situations, but maybe the Queens, New York gang member from your novel would curse in a #%&* minute!

Concluding with Part Three

The next time the Individual Project Topic rolls around, I’ll conclude the fiction book mini-series posts with how to modify your main storyline to comprise a well-rounded plot.

As always, if you have any comments, feel free to leave them below or email to feedback@wordszilla.com.

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